Covenant Law, "The Peace" wrote:Wild West style combat and intimidation doesn't really work to keep society together – it drives people away and it drives supernatural creatures away too. And while there have been Covenants in the past based on the “might is right” principle where the strongest were allowed to eat the smaller at any time, but those Covenants are not around any more.
That second sentence needs adjusting for grammar. "And while" can be taken out, or "but" can be taken out, or some other fix as you please.
also, the paragraph ends with, "
without chopping anyone's head of.", which should probably be "off", not "of".
The Limits of Magic wrote:Thematically speaking, sorcery is magical knowledge. Thus, much of it is newly researched an much of it can be discovered from ancient texts.
an should be and.
Detecting and Countering Magic wrote:Mostly, Basic Disciplines are detectable to Way Out Range, Advanced Disciplines the expenditure of 3 or more power points are detectable to Extreme Range, and Elder Disciplines or the expenditure of 5 power points are detectable out to Remote Range. The expenditure of more than 5 power points at once is detectable out to as many kilometers.
"Advanced Disciplines the expenditure of 3" should be "Advanced Disciplines
or the expenditure of 3"
Celerity, last sentence first paragraph wrote:In general, character whose Celerity more than doubles their speed in any dimension would constitute a masquerade breach.
grammar.
Dominate wrote:If they again fail to resist the effects, they carry out the order even if it s something hey are ideologically opposed to.
if it
is something
they are