he said and promptly forgot <.<Stahlseele wrote:saga of, not sage of.
i'll read the warhammer and this one tomorrow :P
http://www.the-unpublishable.com/2014/0 ... ayers.html
"revered his grip" errr, close, but no cookie.
reversed i'd guess.
"Then the shieldwall would flesh"
i did not know a shieldwall could flesh, either i am once again no match for your linguistic skill or you typoed and meant flash.
two things in general:
is the shaving of the beard and making it into a weapon a thing in WHF or did you make that one up? because that's badass.
http://www.the-unpublishable.com/2014/0 ... aster.html
"save colored white instead of scarlet"
is that really gramatically correct? O.o
"lightclubs"
the hell?
how would that even work?
would that not simply be, by design and technology, a light sword with a wider blade?
because this is still laser/plasma right? so it will still melt/burn/cut through just about anything it hits correct?
"balding pate golden-skinned pate"
even without knowing what pate you mean, i think in this case one of them at least is wrong right?
can't find any other real errors in this one ^^