After Sundown: Printed

The homebrew forum

Moderator: Moderators

User avatar
virgil
King
Posts: 6339
Joined: Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:54 pm

After Sundown: Printed

Post by virgil »

I got antsy at my lack of being able to refer to the After Sundown rules through paper, and using a library printer just isn't cutting it. As far as I'm aware, Frank's not in the market to print it himself, and thus I took matters into my own hands. It took a bit to make it properly, and I'm not going to be exactly reproduce this...

Front Coster
Image
Back Cover
Image
Interior Sample
Image
Last edited by virgil on Tue Sep 10, 2013 3:44 am, edited 2 times in total.
Come see Sprockets & Serials
How do you confuse a barbarian?
Put a greatsword a maul and a greataxe in a room and ask them to take their pick
EXPLOSIVE RUNES!
User avatar
Maxus
Overlord
Posts: 7645
Joined: Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:54 pm

Post by Maxus »

How much did that run?
He jumps like a damned dragoon, and charges into battle fighting rather insane monsters with little more than his bare hands and rather nasty spell effects conjured up solely through knowledge and the local plantlife. He unerringly knows where his goal lies, he breathes underwater and is untroubled by space travel, seems to have no limits to his actual endurance and favors killing his enemies by driving both boots square into their skull. His agility is unmatched, and his strength legendary, able to fling about a turtle shell big enough to contain a man with enough force to barrel down a near endless path of unfortunates.

--The horror of Mario

Zak S, Zak Smith, Dndwithpornstars, Zak Sabbath. He is a terrible person and a hack at writing and art. His cultural contributions are less than Justin Bieber's, and he's a shitmuffin. Go go gadget Googlebomb!
User avatar
virgil
King
Posts: 6339
Joined: Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:54 pm

Post by virgil »

After it was all said and done; $25
Come see Sprockets & Serials
How do you confuse a barbarian?
Put a greatsword a maul and a greataxe in a room and ask them to take their pick
EXPLOSIVE RUNES!
User avatar
Maxus
Overlord
Posts: 7645
Joined: Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:54 pm

Post by Maxus »

...huh. That's food for thought
He jumps like a damned dragoon, and charges into battle fighting rather insane monsters with little more than his bare hands and rather nasty spell effects conjured up solely through knowledge and the local plantlife. He unerringly knows where his goal lies, he breathes underwater and is untroubled by space travel, seems to have no limits to his actual endurance and favors killing his enemies by driving both boots square into their skull. His agility is unmatched, and his strength legendary, able to fling about a turtle shell big enough to contain a man with enough force to barrel down a near endless path of unfortunates.

--The horror of Mario

Zak S, Zak Smith, Dndwithpornstars, Zak Sabbath. He is a terrible person and a hack at writing and art. His cultural contributions are less than Justin Bieber's, and he's a shitmuffin. Go go gadget Googlebomb!
...You Lost Me
Duke
Posts: 1854
Joined: Mon Jan 10, 2011 5:21 am

Post by ...You Lost Me »

want
User avatar
OgreBattle
King
Posts: 6820
Joined: Sat Sep 03, 2011 9:33 am

Post by OgreBattle »

I want LeVar Burton to read that book to me.
User avatar
Meikle641
Duke
Posts: 1314
Joined: Mon May 05, 2008 8:24 pm
Location: Ontario, Canada
Contact:

Post by Meikle641 »

I talked with Frank about publishing AS fairly recently in a PM. It'd be ages before I'd have the funds ready for it, though, but my main plans were to get paid artwork and get it professionally edited and stuff.
Official Discord: https://discord.gg/ZUc77F7
Twitter: @HrtBrkrPress
FB Page: htttp://facebook.com/HrtBrkrPress
My store page: https://heartbreaker-press.myshopify.co ... ctions/all
Book store: http://www.drivethrurpg.com/browse/pub/ ... aker-Press
User avatar
virgil
King
Posts: 6339
Joined: Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:54 pm

Post by virgil »

Oh yeah, the thing would be definitely improved with an editor and paid art. The main person I know for developmental editing would cost .05/word
Come see Sprockets & Serials
How do you confuse a barbarian?
Put a greatsword a maul and a greataxe in a room and ask them to take their pick
EXPLOSIVE RUNES!
Username17
Serious Badass
Posts: 29894
Joined: Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:54 pm

Post by Username17 »

That's impressive.

-Username17
rampaging-poet
Knight
Posts: 473
Joined: Sat Oct 23, 2010 5:18 am

Post by rampaging-poet »

I also had After Sundown printed recently, but my copies aren't nearly as impressive as that. I had five spiral-bound softcovers printed from the old PDF with the cathedral and floating heads on the cover, and they cost about $22 each after taxes. We haven't had a chance to actually play yet, but the rules are much easier to refer to this way.
DSMatticus wrote:I sort my leisure activities into a neat and manageable categorized hierarchy, then ignore it and dick around on the internet.
My deviantArt account, in case anyone cares.
User avatar
virgil
King
Posts: 6339
Joined: Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:54 pm

Post by virgil »

About half a decade ago, I had the Tomes printed into spiral-bound softcover (F&K's work only). I can't remember how much that set me back, but that was something I used often in games. Obviously I've progressed in my production values :P
Last edited by virgil on Tue Sep 10, 2013 3:51 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Come see Sprockets & Serials
How do you confuse a barbarian?
Put a greatsword a maul and a greataxe in a room and ask them to take their pick
EXPLOSIVE RUNES!
User avatar
OgreBattle
King
Posts: 6820
Joined: Sat Sep 03, 2011 9:33 am

Post by OgreBattle »

How far could you go with just public domain artwork? A lot of these monster concepts are rather classical.

Like a Dragon Slayer/Dragon from Peter Paul Reubens (for Marduk Society perhaps)
Image
Or here's a vampire from 1899, and some B&W photo of a vampire
Image
Image
And movies like Metropolis and Nosferatu are public domain
Image

A lot of current RPG artwork is worse in comparison.
Last edited by OgreBattle on Wed Sep 11, 2013 9:59 am, edited 3 times in total.
User avatar
Prak
Serious Badass
Posts: 17349
Joined: Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:54 pm

Post by Prak »

I've kind of been wanting to kickstart a printing run of AS. It's an option, especially if we could poach some WoD fanboys with the right presentation.
Cuz apparently I gotta break this down for you dense motherfuckers- I'm trans feminine nonbinary. My pronouns are they/them.
Winnah wrote:No, No. 'Prak' is actually a Thri Kreen impersonating a human and roleplaying himself as a D&D character. All hail our hidden insect overlords.
FrankTrollman wrote:In Soviet Russia, cosmic horror is the default state.

You should gain sanity for finding out that the problems of a region are because there are fucking monsters there.
TarkisFlux
Duke
Posts: 1147
Joined: Sun Jun 22, 2008 9:44 pm
Location: Magic Mountain, CA
Contact:

Post by TarkisFlux »

I'd kickstart a revised/second edition (like the one recently being discussed) print run... though I don't know how much traction you'd get for a one-off project like this with no pre-existing plans for future support or even future print runs.
The wiki you should be linking to when you need a wiki link - http://www.dnd-wiki.org

Fectin: "Ant, what is best in life?"
Ant: "Ethically, a task well-completed for the good of the colony. Experientially, endorphins."
User avatar
codeGlaze
Duke
Posts: 1083
Joined: Wed Oct 05, 2011 9:38 pm

Post by codeGlaze »

That's... really cool.
User avatar
virgil
King
Posts: 6339
Joined: Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:54 pm

Post by virgil »

TarkisFlux wrote:I'd kickstart a revised/second edition (like the one recently being discussed) print run... though I don't know how much traction you'd get for a one-off project like this with no pre-existing plans for future support or even future print runs.
Yeah, any Kickstarter for this would be for funding the most current version of the system; if the revised talk goes deeper, than we should wait until that one is done. As it stands, a professional editing would cost in the $8k range. Paying for professional art, even just the cover, is/should be in the $1-2 thousand range; interior pieces running from a quarter to half that depending on size/complexity. Then we need to get it properly formatted for print, which includes getting pieces hyperlinked within a PDF document; probably about $200. As much as I'm certain we will spread and market it ourselves for free, it can't hurt to get a professional for marketing and PR, which I would aim for about $5k since I'm including web-design.

That's $15.000 just to get it made for publication. Without a distribution deal in place, we have to presume print-on-demand (at least 3 I know of without thinking) is being used. If we got enough preorders, PoD can produce it for ~$20 (vs my $25) apiece. As there is certainly something missing in charges here, an After Sundown Kickstarter should aim for $20.000.

Obviously promises of releasing the other supplements as Frank's described (the world books, the past/future books, etc) would help. Supplements should require primary input/direction/approval from Frank himself, which is dependent on his own willingness/ability with whomever's contributing. I personally wish I was good enough that my writing contributions would be considered for such products (/self-deprecation).
Last edited by virgil on Thu Sep 12, 2013 4:23 am, edited 1 time in total.
Come see Sprockets & Serials
How do you confuse a barbarian?
Put a greatsword a maul and a greataxe in a room and ask them to take their pick
EXPLOSIVE RUNES!
User avatar
CatharzGodfoot
King
Posts: 5668
Joined: Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:54 pm
Location: North Carolina

Post by CatharzGodfoot »

So... I'm a professional copy editor now, and I'd be willing to do it for free. Or for money.

But it's true that you might be better off with an editor specialized in literature rather than technical manuals and tests.

And I think you might be underestimating the cost of good layout.
The law in its majestic equality forbids the rich as well as the poor from stealing bread, begging and sleeping under bridges.
-Anatole France

Mount Flamethrower on rear
Drive in reverse
Win Game.

-Josh Kablack

User avatar
virgil
King
Posts: 6339
Joined: Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:54 pm

Post by virgil »

CatharzGodfoot wrote:So... I'm a professional copy editor now, and I'd be willing to do it for free. Or for money.

But it's true that you might be better off with an editor specialized in literature rather than technical manuals and tests.

And I think you might be underestimating the cost of good layout.
Oh, the quote I have is from a professional RPG-book editor, so there's that. And yes, good chance I underestimated the layout, probably closer to the 1.5-2k range; I say that low because we can probably get the equivalent of a bulk rate by trying to keep page design on a template.
Last edited by virgil on Fri Sep 13, 2013 4:55 am, edited 1 time in total.
Come see Sprockets & Serials
How do you confuse a barbarian?
Put a greatsword a maul and a greataxe in a room and ask them to take their pick
EXPLOSIVE RUNES!
User avatar
CatharzGodfoot
King
Posts: 5668
Joined: Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:54 pm
Location: North Carolina

Post by CatharzGodfoot »

Virgil, I forgot to mention: regardless of any kickstarting, that book you made is fucking awesome.
The law in its majestic equality forbids the rich as well as the poor from stealing bread, begging and sleeping under bridges.
-Anatole France

Mount Flamethrower on rear
Drive in reverse
Win Game.

-Josh Kablack

User avatar
virgil
King
Posts: 6339
Joined: Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:54 pm

Post by virgil »

I can make more, but I can't use the same cover image as above due to legal constraints. Any future copies would likely use the following image (left side is back cover)
Image
Public domain images that are up to snuff AND suitable for an After Sundown book are really hard to find, by the way.

It would probably cost you guys about $30 per book if you want me to make some for you lot. You need to remember that that the interior will be the layout as set by Frank when he made the PDF, as I haven't messed with it in any attempt to clean it up. I can double-check to know which is the most up-to-date, as I know there are at least two versions floating around.
Last edited by virgil on Thu May 12, 2016 5:04 pm, edited 5 times in total.
Come see Sprockets & Serials
How do you confuse a barbarian?
Put a greatsword a maul and a greataxe in a room and ask them to take their pick
EXPLOSIVE RUNES!
User avatar
Maxus
Overlord
Posts: 7645
Joined: Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:54 pm

Post by Maxus »

I'm interested. Who knows, might be an excuse to make a PayPal.

There's also a third version, one that I explicitly recall had a bunch of monster heads on the cover.

I also seem to remember Frank was the picture of the Leviathan--bugged his eyes out and such.

Edit: Knew it was around someplace. But the torrent's not up and you can't buy it anywhere. But I knew I wasn't crazy
Last edited by Maxus on Fri Sep 13, 2013 5:07 pm, edited 1 time in total.
He jumps like a damned dragoon, and charges into battle fighting rather insane monsters with little more than his bare hands and rather nasty spell effects conjured up solely through knowledge and the local plantlife. He unerringly knows where his goal lies, he breathes underwater and is untroubled by space travel, seems to have no limits to his actual endurance and favors killing his enemies by driving both boots square into their skull. His agility is unmatched, and his strength legendary, able to fling about a turtle shell big enough to contain a man with enough force to barrel down a near endless path of unfortunates.

--The horror of Mario

Zak S, Zak Smith, Dndwithpornstars, Zak Sabbath. He is a terrible person and a hack at writing and art. His cultural contributions are less than Justin Bieber's, and he's a shitmuffin. Go go gadget Googlebomb!
User avatar
virgil
King
Posts: 6339
Joined: Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:54 pm

Post by virgil »

After Sundown
Image
As in the link above, the game is now available in glossy hardcover. The back cover will match the prior image's left side. The interior will be as seen in the most recent PDF made by Frank, unchanged from that layout, just as a warning for those who get anal. Realistically, it's going to be a number of months before we see After Sundown Revised complete and ready; but once that happens, I can do this again.

Yes, I cheated using Lulu, I don't care because I have a print copy of After Sundown :mrgreen:

As an aside, the $30 price tag is because it cost me $25 to buy it for myself at cost, and Lulu/Paypal fees take more than I expected. As it stands, eventually it will pay for the art I bought for the cover.
Last edited by virgil on Sat Sep 14, 2013 9:07 am, edited 1 time in total.
Come see Sprockets & Serials
How do you confuse a barbarian?
Put a greatsword a maul and a greataxe in a room and ask them to take their pick
EXPLOSIVE RUNES!
User avatar
OgreBattle
King
Posts: 6820
Joined: Sat Sep 03, 2011 9:33 am

Post by OgreBattle »

TarkisFlux wrote:I'd kickstart a revised/second edition (like the one recently being discussed) print run... though I don't know how much traction you'd get for a one-off project like this with no pre-existing plans for future support or even future print runs.
Stretch Goals then. Or just say that you'll listen to fan feedback for what's wanted next.
User avatar
Maxus
Overlord
Posts: 7645
Joined: Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:54 pm

Post by Maxus »

Allright, because it's cool, I ordered one.
He jumps like a damned dragoon, and charges into battle fighting rather insane monsters with little more than his bare hands and rather nasty spell effects conjured up solely through knowledge and the local plantlife. He unerringly knows where his goal lies, he breathes underwater and is untroubled by space travel, seems to have no limits to his actual endurance and favors killing his enemies by driving both boots square into their skull. His agility is unmatched, and his strength legendary, able to fling about a turtle shell big enough to contain a man with enough force to barrel down a near endless path of unfortunates.

--The horror of Mario

Zak S, Zak Smith, Dndwithpornstars, Zak Sabbath. He is a terrible person and a hack at writing and art. His cultural contributions are less than Justin Bieber's, and he's a shitmuffin. Go go gadget Googlebomb!
User avatar
codeGlaze
Duke
Posts: 1083
Joined: Wed Oct 05, 2011 9:38 pm

Post by codeGlaze »

What happened to the cover art from your first post?
..that was cool. (I will order one as soon as I can get my account over $10 :p )
Post Reply